China Doll

by Tangible heartache   Jul 18, 2008


She sits there;
Arms around herself,
Trying to keep herself together;
Like a broken doll on a shelf.

Tears falling,
Trickling down her cheek.
People pass this old china doll,
One reason, because she is antique.

Glass made from stars,
Paint made from the clouds above.
White porcelain face,
As white as a dove.

People pass by her,
Ignoring her piercing blue-eyed stare,
Watching passerbies,
It seems that no one cares.

Watching from the dusty window,
Her breath fogging the glass,
She watches the kids play,
Watches them pass.

Sitting on the dusty shelf,
Of an old store,
Where she's been all her life,
With no one to adore.

Watching her life pass by,
Day by day,
No one to come,
Nothing to say.

Locked in a box,
Ready to be sold,
Waiting for the day
To unfold.

Written by Makalah July 18, 2008

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  • 14 years ago

    by Black Heart Still Beating

    My gosh. This is amazing. ^.^ I really have no words for how much I like this. It was truly aweinspiring. (I prby spelt that wrong) I'm enviouse right now. 6/5

    **Bri

  • 15 years ago

    by PoetryKnight

    Good one, 5/5 all the way. love the way you put it. kind of inspires me right now.

  • This poem is strong in emotion and a very original topic.I feel as if many of us in this world are like the "china doll" persay.We are all waiting for someone to take us off of our shelves.The format was good and the word choice was smooth and basic.Very good.5/5

    -Amber-

  • 16 years ago

    by Searching for Guidance

    Great usage of imagery, i could fully imagine this desolate, lonely doll. a great read, thanks for sharing!

  • 16 years ago

    by HvN

    Wow... very well written... so sad though ;[

    5/5