by Tangible heartache Jul 18, 2008
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
She sits there; |
My gosh. This is amazing. ^.^ I really have no words for how much I like this. It was truly aweinspiring. (I prby spelt that wrong) I'm enviouse right now. 6/5 |
by PoetryKnight
Good one, 5/5 all the way. love the way you put it. kind of inspires me right now. |
by AmberSherrellxxIve Been Sitting Here Trying To Find Myselfxx
This poem is strong in emotion and a very original topic.I feel as if many of us in this world are like the "china doll" persay.We are all waiting for someone to take us off of our shelves.The format was good and the word choice was smooth and basic.Very good.5/5 |
Great usage of imagery, i could fully imagine this desolate, lonely doll. a great read, thanks for sharing! |
by HvN
Wow... very well written... so sad though ;[ |