You Are Everything {Contest}

by BREEawNUHH   Jul 18, 2008


You're the whisper in the night,
and the stars in my eyes.
You're every fire that I light,
and the reason for my highs.

You're the reflection in my tears,
and my one and only true love.
You're the answer to my fears,
and my only reason to go above.

You're every single breath of air,
and all of the sweet songs the birds sing.
You're every single given glare,
and all of the childrens laughter as they swing.

You're what I dream of when I sleep,
and all I think of when I'm awake.
You're what I only hope to keep,
and part of the family I wish to make.

You're everything that I love and need,
and all I never thought was real.
You're my hero, that's true indeed,
and all I thought I'd never feel.

In case I haven't made it all clear,
I've pretty much fallen for you.
I only hope that you can hear,
do you feel the same way, too?

Briana Coulter
07/18/08

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  • 16 years ago

    by Courageous Dreamer

    Wonderful job. You worded everything oh-so-perfectly and made it sound even more beautiful. I can relate to liking someone and saying that they are everything I want and need, and they are like almost perfect. But, you worded everything so differently in this poem and made it your own. Great job. 5/5.

  • 16 years ago

    by michalla

    I loved it..very touching..xx

  • 16 years ago

    by Karl Wild GG23

    This was such a great read, I loved the way you expressed your love, I feel just like that myself about somebody right now and it's the greatest feelingi nthe world. The pome had a great word choice and a good flow...great job 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Poet on the Piano

    This is really sweet, and I love your word choice and rhyming. You wrote this with such passion and emotions, it all was great!

    "You're the reflection in my tears,
    and my one and only true love.
    You're the answer to my fears,
    and my only reason to go above."

    ^Really good stanza, it flows perfectly and this was really enjoyable to read.......

    Nice write, keep it up!

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