This is really sweet, and I love your word choice and rhyming. You wrote this with such passion and emotions, it all was great! |
This was such a great read, I loved the way you expressed your love, I feel just like that myself about somebody right now and it's the greatest feelingi nthe world. The pome had a great word choice and a good flow...great job 5/5 |
by michalla
I loved it..very touching..xx |
Wonderful job. You worded everything oh-so-perfectly and made it sound even more beautiful. I can relate to liking someone and saying that they are everything I want and need, and they are like almost perfect. But, you worded everything so differently in this poem and made it your own. Great job. 5/5. |