by StefQ Jul 19, 2008
category :
Love, romance /
i love you
When bells ring, that sunny day, |
I just lived ur poem...It created a beautiful imaginary ! It had a crisp delicate touch. Awesome,love lasts forever...! |
I like this one. It's a feeling alot of people can relate to, as well as me. I like your style of writin as well. It rhymes, but not ever line has to. And you still make it sounds pretty good. 5/5 |