A Lonely Heart's One Night Stand

by Bugg   Jul 19, 2008


She saw him across the room,
He winked at her, beer in hand.
And so begins the fateful tale,
of a lonesome girl and her one night stand.

Slowly he walked over to her
And softly whispered in her ear,
"Follow me to the upstairs bedroom.
It's ok, you have nothing to fear."

And so she followed him,
He was everything she'd never had
Slowly she let him undress her,
Believing that he wanted her bad.

He was everything to her.
She knew that he was the one.
She fell asleep soon after,
But he left when he was done.

She looked for him all over school,
He wasn't there, she couldn't see
That he wasn't even her age,
Poor girl, he was twenty-three!

She wants to forget about him,
But it's too hard for her poor soul.
"Maybe he didn't love me...
I should've had more self-control."

She was just a lonely girl,
Looking for something grand.
And he was just some random guy
There for her one night stand.

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  • 13 years ago

    by Malachi

    Crap, this makes me wanna cry, but I loved it so much! You really have a way with words and well, I am just envious of how awesome you write. It flows so well and makes me happy! Although it was sad, it was really well written and I won't ever forget it!

  • 16 years ago

    by xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex

    Alright.
    Honestly, this is a really cliche poem for me. Everyone always talks about one night stands and what not, and it wasn't creative.

    My personal opinion, of course, but I think you need to add more emotion into by far. Spice it up a little with more detail and don't go so cliche on everything you say.

    However, it had a nice flow except for the fifth stanza.

    xTheEcstasyofSuicidex 3.5

  • 16 years ago

    by benjamin

    "She saw him across the room,
    He winked at her, beer in hand.
    And so begins the fateful tale,
    of a lonesome girl and her one night stand."

    i love this stanza the best b/c it starts off the story .. not to say your other poems dont tell stories so no offense i hope... it gives the poem a feel and a first part to it.. so the reader knows whats going on.
    this was a great poem as well as your other ones

  • 16 years ago

    by smiley

    I love it !! It good

  • 16 years ago

    by smiley

    I love it !! It good

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