Nice poem. The line "Myself inside will die pretty soon..." sounds kinda awquard but other than that the rythm and flow is pretty good. I personaly find words like 'strive' or 'pretty' or other words with sharp consonants make thoughtful poems like this one a tad choppy. I'm not saying that any of these are huge problems, im splitting hairs here lol. I love the poem. Great job!

Poem is good but some lines are not that well measured. You can make it more compact one.

Good job girl...