Scratch my back and I will stab you in yours

I love the similes and metatphors in this. they are very well put. i also like the title, very to the point. your writing style is very unique, no rhyme or story-like setting. just tell it how it is. nice. 5/5

"Scratch my back and I will stab you in yours
I want to break the trust that's instilled in me by others
I suppose it's just another self destructing habit I've accumulated"
^^^
[Wow. Alright. I'm going to tell you now, you do an amazing job when you're not trying to rhyme.
The first lines a bit, eh, but when put with the next two; wow, I really love this beginning. I think there should be a period here.. or a space; something. Give it a pause before this next line; it would set more emphasis.]

"Lying, Cheating, Substance abuse a few that can be related
to the day you walked out on me through that door
Leaving me feeling as important as the dirt on the floor"
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[Ohhh. Shot down. You went cliche on me again. Remember how I said don't get personal? You did. And, "as important as the dirt floor"... Hun, with the first three lines I KNOW you can do better than that.]

"So i turn to these habits to fill the empty void
To replace the loss of love, it's all I can do to avoid"
^^^
[I like these lines.. I'm not sure why, they just were well written, I suppose.]

"Perhaps another shot will drown away the pain
or perhaps its a different shot i need to relieve this ball and chain"
^^^
[Cliche again.]

[Overall, it wasn't too bad... It started disappointing me half way through the poem because the beginning was so great and then you went cliche on me again. I knwo you can write, Alex.. But you can't force it. Don't try to rhyme; just write. Don't write what everyone else writes; write your own. You CAN do it.. I know you can. Those first three lines had me in love.]

Take care, babe.
xx.

xTheEcastasyofSuicidex 4.5

Another great poem. I like your writing style. I've only read a couple of yours, but I really enjoy the titles, as well--they're creative and original.

This was amazing and so sad, I loved it. Very well written XD!

I purposely made the title different from the message I think the title fits itself because you go into it thinking your going to get one thing and you get another