You'd Never Start My Fire

by NyellMoonlight   Jul 19, 2008


Beseech tainted senses to start bleeding again
because I tasted death and brittle deities, already
fought with clouds formed to represent sentinels
somewhere behind eyelids of all those broken auras.

She took one life away tonight- Music flies, whispering
over fields soaked with liquefied, sapphire imagination.
I had it all within one lucid, cerulean second-
there's some shattered light hanged behind the window.

Epicenter of the divinity revolves around catastrophes
- you'd never start my fire, indeed,
yet- dabbled emotions spill honey disasters over thoughts;
Beseech my tainted senses, implore silent tears.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Singthesorrow

    I really like this one.

  • 16 years ago

    by Poet on the Piano

    Wow, this is really good. The first stanza was great and it kept getting better. I loved the wording in the second stanza. Great ending line, and very captivating all throughout this poem. Keep writing, always and forever.....

  • 16 years ago

    by Bare My Paradox

    I had it all within one lucid, cerulean second-
    there's some shattered light hanged behind the window.

    ^^^^
    these words were enchanting...
    the whole poem was captivating...
    original,aesthetic,intriguing.

    take care
    Isha

  • 16 years ago

    by ether

    This is amazing.
    Sad, powerful, moving.
    The vocabulary and flow are flawless as is the form.

    Amazing work, I love it.
    Keep it up, 5/5

    jess ~

  • 16 years ago

    by Beautiful Chaos

    I still have not pieced together all of your first stanza lol I really like the second though:

    "Music flies, whispering
    over fields soaked with liquefied, sapphire imagination."

    This was beautiful to me, I got such a picture in my head, just wonderful.

    I also really like your ending line, your wording is nice and not over complicated. As always a great job.

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