by moonlight2105 Jul 19, 2008
category :
Nature, environment /
nature
When the sun was downing behind the dunes, |
Changed some wording, might get a 4.1 now :) |
Why panned??, It's about a scorpion, the beasts got poison in their sting :) Ok, maybe to die is to much - but shall I write "it hurts", aouch! |
A different and interesting read. I enjoyed it as we tire of the same poems and subject matter over and over. very nicely penned |