This is a part of my novel, I am writing.please comment and be honest.thank you.
You want me to describe the pain inside of me. No words can describe it. It hurts. It really hurts. If I wrap my arms around myself and hold tight it keeps the pain in. When he left, he took a big part of me with him. I am sure he never meant to hurt me, he never meant to break my heart. I try to put on a cheerful face. I smile, I laugh, I carry on with life. Only because I don’t want people to see the pain within me. The pain rips through my heart, body and mind. Makes me numb and cold. I can see it in my eyes in the mirror - I feel dead inside. Apart of me is fighting this. I am fighting to be the person I once was.
