Comments : Your words just keep on calling.... (Lyric)

  • 16 years ago

    by waiting 4 some1

    *clap hands* wonderful poem Ash, really wonderful.

    i can't choose a favorite part because i have many but i will choose the end, it was really excellent

    "I'm just waiting for a better day,
    Let's just walk our separate way.
    Take the pain you gave and shut the door.
    I'm telling you now I want no more!"

    ...its a wonderful thing to write poems for your friends espcially those who need support at that time

  • 16 years ago

    by Extinct Angel

    Beautiful poem damn near made me cry i have posted two new poems incase you wanna read but no ones asking i really did like this poem though i think it deserves a spot on my faves list

  • 16 years ago

    by Prasad Baadkar

    That was such a touching poem n u r an example of d pillar of strength n this is wat others shud learn from... A TRUE Fren n I m proud of u fren...

    Who say angels dont exist n if anyone says so its time they meet ash n her lovely world of poetry...

    Liked it as all ur writes..

    Keep sharing...

    Karan