Love Hurts

by iM LYiNG tO MY SELf   Jul 19, 2008


U feel like u have it
but then u loose grip

an urge to move foward
but suddenly u slip

u feel hurt and abandoned
but it wasn't ur fault

but u still feel guilty
so u come to a hault

u cry and u weep
u feel lost and depressed

but thinking about it
made u wish u confessed

for in the end
u realize its only for the best

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  • 16 years ago

    by HvN

    A decent flow, nice word choice.

    keep up the good work! 5/5

  • I rlly liked this poem :]]

    Nice job ^^

  • 16 years ago

    by Will

    Great poem Kelsey, I really enjoyed it and the ABCB Rhyme went well...5/5 keep it up