by Fading Memory Jul 19, 2008
category :
Love, romance /
desired love
Everyone can see you in my eyes |
Really nice poem. |
by mandy
Don't know what the first girl was talking about^... This was an absalutly beautiful job well done. It flowed very nicely, I love it 5/5! |
I like it!! Its very touching!! <3 |
by Hollywood
Umm its good but i do think that you should change the first 2 lines and make it more intregging |