I love this poem.
I like your style of writing. It is very creative. This poem is sad, but it is very beautiful.
I especially liked,
"I don't know what went wrong.
This is just like all the other heart breaking songs."
I also love your title. Very creative.
(comment my poems please. the new ones. tell me what you think)
Thank you!

--Justina

Oh, how those memories are bittersweet? As they enter your mind, usually upon waking, they deceive you into thinking all is well, all is happy and there is no pain. Wrong! Realilty kicks in as you realise that your love has gone, never to return, never to have the chance to repeat those sweet, so loving memories. In the shadows of goodbye the light makes you smile then cry!!!

Well done

Michael