Comments : Mirror, Mirror

  • 16 years ago

    by Tangible heartache

    This was a wonderfully written poem, it is so short, yet it just has the meaning written well into it.

    "Mirror, mirror of shattered glass
    Here we go again, back to the past
    Slice my skin and slice it well
    Take my life, I will not tell"

    That is my favorite stanza, the rhyming was perfect, and it was so ture as well.

    Obviously a 5/5 poem. Beautiful, I love it. Keep it up ^_^

    -Babygirl

  • 16 years ago

    by BitterXSweetness

    I love ur poetry. It's so deep and sometimes crazy but always has meaning behind it. It's sad, but life is sad until something better comes along and this world is gone. But I really love ur poetry. I thought that with this poem, like I said b4, it's deep. 5/5