Wow.
Thats really touching.
Is that true?
Please just let me know.
I'm curious...
But wow.
It's like amazing.
Your really great.
As does my boyfriend.

Last paragraph it should be cut too deep

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it seem that girl need attention she need somone to nptice her and hear her and save her

she want to be saved and someone to hear her

it is a sad peace of poem , very sad and the description is very good

but i know their is always much hope if you want to look

good work