by kate Jul 20, 2008
category :
Love, romance /
i love you
You take my breath away. |
This poem sounded like an immature love. Sort of like a 14 year old telling someone they liked them. |
by Dan
Fantastic poem. A little critique would be capitalize all the first letters because you do it for a few then stop then start again. Other than that it was great. |
by The Queen
I believe that writing a love poem is not as easy as writing a sad one but youve done here a fantastic job...A very sweet dedication to your bf filled with so much love and affection. |