Wow. Um, this poem was literally "Knee deep in emotions".. Ironic! Like your name. Anyways, this poem contained a whole lot of feelings! I love how you used the idea about what your broken heart would say/ask if it could speak. I loved the title, it was very intriguing and definatly got me interested! This piece was again, very well written. You have a very unique way of writing that I've never seen before, and that makes your poems fabulous! I love seeing what makes a poet different from all the rest, and the format is what makes you different. Keep up the fantastic writing, you seem to let our your feelings extremely well and clear for the world to see. :] 5/5