I would've never guessed you had insomnia.
[stares blankly at the ceiling]
Depression? You seem like a really fun, cool person. So far. Lol

Okay okay, enough about that. And...the personal note.

You are a true POET! My goodness. I was blown away by this poem. This exquisite piece of art. It was just, ART ART ART!

Master piece.

Word structure was marvelous!

I like the opening, the beginning to this poem. It was so strong.

I like how the flow was throughout the poem.

Amber? YOU ROCK MY SOCKS!

I really really...[screw it] THIS HAS BECAME MY FAVORITE POEM.

This is amazing!

Great poem!! i loved it! and BELIEVE ME, i know how u feel..

I honestly loved this poem a lot. You put the reader like in the eyes of an insomniac. For me, never being one and not knowing what goes on in an insomniac's life.. I wouldn't know how it feels. However, this poem really truely described it very well. You did a excellent job describing how hard it is for them to go to sleep and how they are constantly looking at the time that just passes so slowly. I love how you added the touch of the depression and feelings that you have and mixed them into the whole insomniac thing, that was really unique and definatly showed true emotions. This piece was fabulous. I enjoy your work, and I'm going to read and comment more of it. I love your format too, it's written in paragraphs but honestly it's really easy to read. :] 5/5