My Love!
by Bethany Jul 20, 2008
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I love my love but you now what he does he brakes my heart in two! i love him whith all my heart out of the blue he hates me! if he wonts to be with her go ahead and break me in two! |
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16 years ago
by P00ki3B3ar
I personaly think you are a very good writer and i can relate alot to what you write but try replacing repeating words with another word that means the same it will make it flow much better but i still gave you a 4/5 because it is still very good but you just need a few minor adjustments other than that you are a very good short poem writer! keep up the good writing!
