A Day at the BEACH

by lilly   Jul 20, 2008


The hot sand under my pail feet
Wanting to get a tan
The smell of salt water rushing by my seat
wanting a nice cool fan

Know of the high tides i dare not go out too far
All the sharks don't scare me
Wanting to lay there all night and look out at the stars
I'm never going to leave the great blue sea

Building as many tan sea castles as the eye can see
To taste the water can be not so tasteful
Free at sea is where i want to be
With only a day there i don't want to be wasteful

My day at the beach is done
No more sand beneath my feet
My day under the sun is done
No more smelling the water by my seat

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  • 16 years ago

    by Tiffany

    It was pretty good....

  • 16 years ago

    by Your My inspiration

    Good job.. i like it

  • 16 years ago

    by JUSTiNA

    Great poem!!
    It is nicely written.
    I like your writing style. Not too many people write in that style and i love it.

    especially liked this stanza:
    Know of the high tides i dare not go out too far
    All the sharks don't scare me
    Wanting to lay there all night and look out at the stars
    I'm never going to leave the great blue sea"

    Good job!!
    (comment my new poem, please. I want everyone's opinion on it.)
    Thank you!!!

    && continue writing!!

    --Justina