Comments : A Day at the BEACH

  • 16 years ago

    by JUSTiNA

    Great poem!!
    It is nicely written.
    I like your writing style. Not too many people write in that style and i love it.

    especially liked this stanza:
    Know of the high tides i dare not go out too far
    All the sharks don't scare me
    Wanting to lay there all night and look out at the stars
    I'm never going to leave the great blue sea"

    Good job!!
    (comment my new poem, please. I want everyone's opinion on it.)
    Thank you!!!

    && continue writing!!

    --Justina

  • 16 years ago

    by Your My inspiration

    Good job.. i like it

  • 16 years ago

    by Tiffany

    It was pretty good....