Comments : The Path of Ligthrins and Hollows (part1) story

  • 16 years ago

    by Rain

    I think it's really good so far, can't wait to see it when it's finished!

  • 16 years ago

    by Ignoris

    Very well done, the path of thoughts racing through the mind...I enjoyed it.
    Stay real, chin up, and take care.
    Eleni

  • 15 years ago

    by Iris

    Whoa!
    lol i'm so ready for the next part!
    very awesome so far!