You Said.

by LiveLoveLearnDie   Jul 20, 2008


You said you loved me,
but you let me be.
you said you loved me,
but only lies I see.

you said you would stay here,
you were my one, the one.
you were my cuddle bear,
our love together wheighed a ton.

you walked away,
leaving me behind,
not seeing what you left at bay,
leaving me behind.

you said you loved me,
but you let me be.
you said you loved me,
but only lies I see.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Mister 47

    Mmm , i dont think this poem is string enough to express the real feelings you want to say

    weak choice of words

    structure wize and rythm is good

  • 16 years ago

    by XxBrokenInsidexX

    This poem was hard for me to read because Im going through this right now..and it deff hurts...it was really good I liked it!

  • 16 years ago

    by XxShadowxOfxYourxShadowxXMyxMiNdxIsxFrOzEnxX

    I liked this one...
    nice job...

  • 16 years ago

    by Barbara Jean

    I know the feeling..awesome poem.5

  • 16 years ago

    by Cristian Teo Regalado

    Im sorry this happened to you... This should happen to anyone but sadly it happens to so many people...:( And it shouldn't its happened to me more than once i feel your pain.... Sorry Again I loved the poem Tho :) 5/5

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