Wow such saddness and pain. i know how hurt and betrayed you must feel just keep looking love is out there it just takes alot of time but youll find it very good flow and ryhming its an amazing piece! 5/5

I liked it such beautiful sadness in it excellent 5/5

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This poem was really amazing,I totally loved it and it was so touching.
Nice poem 5\5.

Im sorry this happened to you... This should happen to anyone but sadly it happens to so many people...:( And it shouldn't its happened to me more than once i feel your pain.... Sorry Again I loved the poem Tho :) 5/5

I know the feeling..awesome poem.5

I liked this one...
nice job...

This poem was hard for me to read because Im going through this right now..and it deff hurts...it was really good I liked it!

Mmm , i dont think this poem is string enough to express the real feelings you want to say

weak choice of words

structure wize and rythm is good