How could you?

by xXBloodyXKissesXx   Jul 20, 2008


Another cut,
I can not bare,
Another memory.
How can i care?

You told me you were there.
yeah, that was a lie.
i gave you my everything,
How can you make me cry?

I was so strong,
You tried to knock me down.
I gave in and fell,
I fell to the ground!

Another bruise,
You hit me again.
does it not apear to you,
What your doing is a sin?

I took away the metal bat,
I sat though court, in denial.
i was on your side,
Yet, you left me senile?

I tried to be there,
But it just wouldn't suffice.
I made it through,
But you made no sacrifice!

i'm still waiting for the bruises to heal,
I want to be clean,
I want to be here,
I wish i was seen.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Mister 47

    Wow strong one , structure wise you did a good job regarding spliting it into paragraphs and the rhyming obviosly you woked hard on it but it seem you need to work more on it ,
    the feelings are good and the flow is ok , but you seem to loose control over teh feelings and like get angryu in the last couple of paragraphs in the poem , you started ok but finsihed angry

    i hope you work more on that one it can be good

  • 16 years ago

    by XxShadowxOfxYourxShadowxXMyxMiNdxIsxFrOzEnxX

    This is wonderful poem...So much feelings...

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