Comments : Beautiful Creation

  • 16 years ago

    by Crystal Rose Blooming

    This was a lovely read:

    The heavens and earth were at last complete;
    His work of creation was finished.
    He set aside other work He had been doing,
    for He declared this a holy time of rest.
    And He lovingly looked over what had been created
    and saw only beauty.
    --
    This stanza very nice. It's to bad humans are destroying his beautiful earth. You are a great free verse poet, you open the eyes of the reader allowing them to see your words as described. Well done