So inspiring and so clear. I just love it and try not to make the poem too long. You have my vote and I hope I have yours!

4/5

~Chinwe~

Great poem!

You started off real well, but i think there's a spelling error in the first stanza:

"Please, I don't know how
else to be let lose of
his grip that keeps me
here like trapped dove."

isn't there suppose to be a "a" between the words "like" and "trapped"?

correct me if i'm wrong!

another error is

in this stanza:

"I saw how her eyes
were closed. I saw
blood on his face and I
was chocked with aw."

I Think the "aw" you meant is spelled "Awe"

but other then that the poem was really good, doesn't matter how long it is, it tells a good story. :]