Memories, Eternal

by xToBeWithYoux   Jul 20, 2008


Silence
and the echoes creep away
into the darkness, slowly.

Imagine. The pain too great,
the cries too loud.
Memories fading into the mist
like our last goodbye.

I try to forget,
I try to resist,
but I know I am being called.

Breaking free from dreams of death
I know that where I belong is
far, far away from you.

You can't bring me down again.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Kaila

    Nice poem! It actually sort of reminded me of song lyrics. I like the powering part you know when you read a love poem like this usually its a sad how can I posibly go on writing but this was very powerful and good
    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Courageous Dreamer

    This poem is short, but for being so short it definatly said a lot. I think maybe you could say more, but that's entirely up to you. I love the format though, that was unique. Great job. 5/5. But, there's always more you can say to a short poem. :]

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