This poem is short, but for being so short it definatly said a lot. I think maybe you could say more, but that's entirely up to you. I love the format though, that was unique. Great job. 5/5. But, there's always more you can say to a short poem. :]

Nice poem! It actually sort of reminded me of song lyrics. I like the powering part you know when you read a love poem like this usually its a sad how can I posibly go on writing but this was very powerful and good
5/5