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by iM LYiNG tO MY SELf Jul 20, 2008 category : Love, romance / lost love
You shiver and you shake I am always In your dreams for what you did was not ok you hide it with your screams You told me that you loved me you told me that you cared but if you truly meant it the thought was yet unshared Our silence was deceptive our eyes, they never met we walked right past each other In pure and frank regret Your eyes they were so dreamy their presence I wont miss for every time I looked in them they showed no sign of bliss I don't ask for forgiveness what you did you cant forgive you told me that you loved me with that guilt you'll always live
by Austin
Ahhh yes, the classic love poem. I liked it. This very good considering you're only 14. You have a bright future in poetry. 5/5
by Will
And you try to tell me im better? this is a very good, poem that reminds me of a few eople....keep it up...5/5