I liked this one bcuz i can relate to it. even though it was quite short, but you expressed rather well. job well done. 5/5.

-ashlei.

Well at first i thought ok, this poem is a little morbid, lol, but then it got down to the bottom and it was a cute sweet love poem, i liked it, but to me it didnt particutlarly(sp?) sound much like a poem, but it was still good, 4/5