This is brilliant..
Moved me, a hell of a lot, poems you can relate to hit you the hardest..
"Because that's all you ever wanted me to be,
was that girl that always smiled beautifully."

A beautiful couplet
Well done :)

Beautiful poem. I can relate to this very much. I love the flow of your poem. And I could feel ever word leaping off the page, putting images in my mind, plying a story for me. I love the way you write, you are very gifted =)

Aw. This is really sad. It's always heartbreaking when you confess your love to someone, and they can't tell you they love you the way you love them.

"You told me not to let my smile fade away,
and to make sure that I let it shine and not be sad.
Because that's all you ever wanted me to be,
was that girl that always smiled beautifully."

^^ I loved this stanza. I like how you gave the reader an idea as to what the other person said; gave the reader a chance to hear what the other person felt.

Great job, as usual. 5/5

``Briana

I love it temps. You gave a good description of it and I am sure people will relate to it. it's deep and written in a realistic way. I love your last two stanzas. They rly get to me Ive read them a few times...

Good job cakes... And I love to make you smile =)

The original rejection. tragic. yet a beautiful thing. wonderful work<3

Honesty simply oozed out at me as I read this. I could feel your pain as the story unfolded. As I read I hoped that love would shine, but as life often is, it failed to shine in all its glory. Perhaps one day distance will no longer be an issue and you will both be free to allow your love st shine like the sun.

Well done

Michael

A really nice poem, I loved the last two stanzas, the way the smiles are described, it's beautiful. I also like the way that through the poem, the lines sometimes mismatched, like life is gerneally.

Keep up the brilliant work.

That was very touching piece i love those emotions its very heartfelt 4/8

This is really wonderful, you expressed your emotions and feelings for him so well in this poem. It is also very sad, when you confess your love to him, but he dosen't feel the same way you feel about him.

"Until the day that death do us part,
I'll always love everything about you,
you'll always be known as the only person-
who could make me smile inside and out."

^A really beautifully written stanza. Your flow was great and your words were so touching. I can tell you wrote this with passion and right from your heart. Nice work.

Excellent write. I too have had those feelings and that same situation. What i have learned is it is better to try then have regrets of what could have been. Great job, 5/5

I love it you got skillz