This was a interesting continuation. I kind of liked how you went back and forth between cold and warmth, and now it's back to warmth again. Simply a beautiful poem. <3 5/5

This one is longer. i enjoyed it just as much. great work.

This is one of your better poems. I liked it. My favorite part was the beginning when you were using rhymes though. That kinda fell off and I was sad lol. Good poem still.

btw was this relating to rape? Or am I over thinking this?

I think this poem really does show true love, i love the metafor of your inner child, tht was a great idea, and going from cold to warm and back again but a great choice of direction for this poem, great job, 5/5