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by Broken Inside He only wants to hurt me   Jul 20, 2008


Your burning touch,
Your abusive, icy words,
Could never compete for my affection,
I treated you as though I could never live without you,
I've now learned, I can,
Those icy words can never pierce me again,
No longer can you reach me..with your burning touch,
I'm free from you,
Free from your abuse,
From your haunting stares,
From your abusive ways,
You can never hurt me again.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Dan

    I liked this poem. You sort of funneled your feelings and made it your own. Great write.

    -Dan

  • 16 years ago

    by Stephanie Naylor

    I really liked it, and i am assuming it is about
    "you know who" lol, and i loved the way you channeled your feeling towards him in this poem, i thought it was superb, really great
    another well deserved 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Austin

    I think you had a good concept going when you started this poem, but your spelling and grammatical errors took my mind away from what was happening. Instead of "..." between words, use commas. As for spelling, you only misspelled the word "your".

    I'm not trying to be negative, it was a decent poem. I just want you to make it the best it can be. I'm not going to rate the poem, because I think that it can be considerably better if you edit some lines. Good luck!! =)

    I'll come back in a few days and read it again, if you'd like.

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