This was good I haven't read many Senryu's but I did write one myself and it is hard to do, (for me anyways) so props to you for that. Good job!

Writing a Senryu is very hard. i have yet to master it but this is very good i personally think you nailed it!

I think this Senryu is really a good one. Last line was best of the three... I noticed every one is getting crazy about writing haikus and senryu since lovely Miss Take introduced them.. ;)

Interesting. I've never heard of such a style of writing, but yet again.. you managed to do a wonderful job. Keep exploring these new styles and keep writing!! 5/5.

Nice job. very well detailed with just three lines.5/5
**harlea

ps. thanks for the advice u gave me. really helped alot :)

Thought provoking. Good job on the form. Well thought out!