Moonlight (Haiku)

This is beautiful... moon shimmering... stars sprinkling... gives me and impression of gliterring light... beautiful imagery...

"Stars sprinkle their dust"
^^ loved it...

keep writing..

Love how you wrote "stars sprinkle their dust". Very unique, you made this so interesting to read, and it was such a pleasure! Great job on this.....

I like poems that make me smile. I like poems that paint a delicate picture. It is rare that a haiku captures these elements so beautifully in each measure. But this does.

I hated writing these in elementary school. but i think i shall give it another try :) good work thought :)

Nice hakiu. very discreptive.5/5
**harlea