This was good too, I always found Senryus and Haiku's to be somewhat the same. And as I said in my last comment also very hard to do. I admire any poet who tries different forms of poetry to broaden their specter, and its great to see yours getting wider. :) another 5/5

Wow. This was absolutely fabulous. I thought you did a wonderful job considering it's the first you've posted. I love this, it was full of imagery, although Haiku's are short poems, this was full of it and very beautiful. Great job. 5/5.

Nice hakiu. very discreptive.5/5
**harlea

I hated writing these in elementary school. but i think i shall give it another try :) good work thought :)

I like poems that make me smile. I like poems that paint a delicate picture. It is rare that a haiku captures these elements so beautifully in each measure. But this does.

Love how you wrote "stars sprinkle their dust". Very unique, you made this so interesting to read, and it was such a pleasure! Great job on this.....

This is beautiful... moon shimmering... stars sprinkling... gives me and impression of gliterring light... beautiful imagery...

"Stars sprinkle their dust"
^^ loved it...

keep writing..