Venting Poem

by Bugg   Jul 21, 2008


Why don't you look my way?
You've been the one
For me for way too long now.
Maybe it's time to just be done.

I know you don't like me.
You never talk to me
Or even look in my direction.
This is my heart's plea:

Look at the kind of girl I am!
I can give you what you need.
But I'm never good enough
It's almost guaranteed.

I'm too ugly or fat,
I'm certainly not your type.
But still I'm in love with you.
My friends are sick of all the hype.

I built you up so well in my head,
But you just don't live up to it.
So, now that I'm over you,
You can go suck your mama's tit.

Grr, sorry. Major venting poem. lol

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  • 16 years ago

    by David

    I see its a venting poem, well i love it! love that you have let it all out. its out of you and free. not tearing inside and causing you pain or .... hmmm discomfort? yeah.

    well excellent. this was well excecuted. keep writing, talent must be your middle name.

    5/5 David

  • 16 years ago

    by Zack

    Kail, you aren't ugly or fat. And I know this poem was written for Jerry and if he's stupid enough to not notice how beautiful and amazing you are, then he's not worth your time. Now, I know you and you'll be blabbing about him again tomorrow, but I'm glad you got your feelings out in this poem. lol

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