Dark Spark

by ForeverASickKid   Jul 21, 2008


Darkness
Fell upon the town
The city
Was a dark abyss
A sudden spark
Led to a blazing inferno
Men and women scream
Running for the hills
Bodies and ashes lay on the ground
The end of the world has come
Those who survive wait for death
In an internal darkness

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  • 16 years ago

    by Frederick Mayer

    Excellent work, I had no qualms about giving this material a "5"! :) It first strikes the receiver as a concise news report...this creator has a seeming knack for presenting something that may not be "real", yet the receiver ends up with the uneasy feeling that it really is lurking in the back of their cranium and, later, the poem remains, as a sense of experienced "reality"!

  • 16 years ago

    by DreamingOutLoud

    Wow. this is so far the best poem i have read from you.
    niice work

  • 16 years ago

    by Matt

    Very interesting poem, I liked it 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by CanUKissAwayMyPain

    Wow this was dark and deep full of sumthing else i cant get off my mind. it was WOW!!! i love it. an amazing job here. keep it up!! =)

    TaKe CaRe,
    Frenchy

  • 16 years ago

    by Cyber Saiyan

    Good imagery. Leaving the thesis open for the reader to determine on their own really sets the mood of the writing.

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