To Die For

by ForeverASickKid   Jul 21, 2008


She fell for the guy everyone knew
she was the girl no one knew
she felt strange things
she wanted to tell him
she needed to tell him
she told him at a party
she saddened when he rejected her
she started to weep
she felt as if she was the only one who could have him
she took a gun
she walked to his house
she fired a shot
she wanted him to love her

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  • 15 years ago

    by true secret emo

    Intence

  • 16 years ago

    by Angel Of Death

    Omg this is amazing, so powerful for such a short poem! great work! keep up the great poetry, and thanks for commentin mine
    love love xoxo

  • 16 years ago

    by IML

    Very very intense some way with the girl and the gun.
    i find it some what dark, like an evil jealousy?
    good poem. tells what many people in the world feel.

  • 16 years ago

    by Kelsie Danielle

    HEY U R ROCK OUT LOUD I WILL GIVE U A 5 OUT OF 5 OR MORE IF I COULD

  • 16 years ago

    by iTdOnTmAtTeR

    Hey, i liked this piece, it reminds me of one that i wrote but waaay longer lol, its one of those poems that ud have hoped the writer wrote more but i think its good you left it where u did cuz that makes the reader be like" a man no more?" lol so yeh good job. check out mine lemme see wat u think

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