by ForeverASickKid Jul 21, 2008
category :
Dark, fantasy /
dark, horror
She fell for the guy everyone knew |
Intence |
Omg this is amazing, so powerful for such a short poem! great work! keep up the great poetry, and thanks for commentin mine |
by IML
Very very intense some way with the girl and the gun. |
HEY U R ROCK OUT LOUD I WILL GIVE U A 5 OUT OF 5 OR MORE IF I COULD |
by iTdOnTmAtTeR
Hey, i liked this piece, it reminds me of one that i wrote but waaay longer lol, its one of those poems that ud have hoped the writer wrote more but i think its good you left it where u did cuz that makes the reader be like" a man no more?" lol so yeh good job. check out mine lemme see wat u think |