Lonely Girl

by ForeverASickKid   Jul 21, 2008


She was sad
She had nowhere to go
She was helpless
She was lonely

She was alone
She was in pain
Because the man never came
She was lonely

Her heart sank like the titanic
She felt like she should die
She started to weep
She was lonely

She fell to her knees
With a dagger in her hands
She wanted to die
She was lonely

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  • 15 years ago

    by Ingrid

    A deeply sad poem, well expressed:)

    Take care,

    5/5 Ingrid

  • 16 years ago

    by always in my heart

    She was in pain
    Because the man never came

    very good! love it!

    xx.

  • 16 years ago

    by Searching for Guidance

    Ah :( it makes me want to give her a hug. i hope that "she" was not you.

  • 16 years ago

    by Saving Grace

    I dont really know what to say about this. Its sad, and flowed really well, and ur wording of this write, its deep, and it seemed to draw me in, to keep reading ya no? Nice work. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Robert Gardiner

    Nicely Written, Great Job!!!

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