Wow it amazes me wat you can do its such a beautiful poem i know how you feel its so hard to be me when no one understands me and you expressed exaclty wat i feel all the time you did an amazing job! 5/5 xxxxxxxx

She was so sad, her heart was breaking when he tore her heart from heaving chest.

Well done this is such a powerful poem. The repetition compounds your pain into acute agony.

Michael

Wow very sad. Good job, you made the characters emotions very clear.

Excellent poem well written :)

"She fell to her knees
With a dagger in her hands"

i think that part just flows so beautifully!
amazing i love it, it is so beautiful, sad but beautiful! i gave you a 5!

Oh wow this is really beautiful. Very sad too, and I can really relate. Great job
5/5

I loved this one...
Nice job...

Wow this is an amazing poem. it's short but right to the point.

5/5

I really like this! You did a great job!

Incredible poem. It has great flow and easy to relate to, though in small amount of words. Very very good. 5/5
~Shy

I like the plot this poem is pretty cool

Great poem :) is this your style or writing?

Deep emotion 5/5

Wow. her heart sank like the titanic. those are my favorite lines. keep it up.=)

I liked it once again great poem!!

...Excellent...I Love it Sounds Like Me But Diffrent Gender.....Depression Is'nt Fun Like it Used To be....Im Still A Lil F**ked up From Her And All The Times She Hurt Me....But I Can Cope With It

Dats a excellent poem i reali no how ya feel... wil u comment on my poems plzzzzz

Awwww, sad and sweet, i like it.

This is so sad, yet very beautiful. You did an amazing job expressing your emotions, yet only in few words. Excellent. :)

Such feeling of solitute.
a lovley write.
i love how you kept ur title going thru out the poem

my poem dream on does that.
for some reason
it reminds the reader what the poem is trully about.

5/5