Shattered

All words are true!
Even though I'm a guy!
I wouldn't understand how a victim would feel
but I know they hurt alot! and it makes me
so Mad cause my aunt was raped countless
of times and my sister was kidnapped and he tried rapping her but she got away and I think god so much! And my twin sister was almost kidnapped! =[
But, People who are raped are barley believed
cause it's someone's Uncle, Cousin, Brother or Friend!
But many people need to realize that rapist come in disguise (dnt know if spelled correct)
And most of the rapist, the victim knows them
and in this powerful poem you sorta said that,
you say the boy took the girls trust!
Great poem and Great Message!
20/5

& srry so long I just had alot to say
on such a short but STRONG poem!

Wow, this is sad, but you are a very good poet...5/5...yay...

Your poem really touched my heart....i hope your loss was not completely true and is just a work of your imagination,you do made me to shed a tear.....nice work ....keep it up

This is sad..but i liked how you dedicated it at the end..
awesome poem..
keep up the good work. :)

Aww this is really sad. rape is a horrible evil thing. you wrote this well.