Comments : Shattered

  • 16 years ago

    by Nobody

    Wow you brought me to tears again this poem is so sad but at the same time its beautiful people dont undertand the emotion reckage things like this do to girls! you are so talented its incredalbe what you can do with words! 5/5 xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx

  • 16 years ago

    by Ignoris

    Nice work...thanks for the comment!
    Take care,
    Ignoris

  • 16 years ago

    by ViolentlyDisturbed

    Thats really sweet of you and great poem .

  • 16 years ago

    by ShatteredInPieces

    Wow.

    so powerful.
    well done.

    emotions flow well.

    xx,

  • 16 years ago

    by Trevors Baby Girl Forever

    This is very sad. I know how this feels

    :[[

    I wish i didnt though...

    I hope this never happends to you.

  • 16 years ago

    by Goth marionette

    This is brilliant!!..I enjoyed reading the poem,it was simple and direct..
    Keep up the good work...

  • 16 years ago

    by Chelsea King

    I loved it,and unfortunatley i am one of the girls that had to endure that. I just want to say thank you for writing this poem and getting across that millions of girls lives are ruined because they are raped and knowing that somebody thathas not been raped cares, helps all of the victims out there or it helps me anyway. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by CanUKissAwayMyPain

    I like it. means a lot of things. i like it. cuz of the words u said . i love it great job =)

  • 16 years ago

    by GuRlZ JuZ WaNa HvE FuN

    Hey my nme is jacinta most of the stuff u wrote boud da girl hu gt raped happened 2 my m8 its so inspirin 2 hea dat u can write poems like dat 2 gelp all da grls oud dea in the big wide world dat dis sotr o fing happenz 2

  • 16 years ago

    by Hollywood

    Wow i liked this poem and i writepoems like this and i never have either but it inspires me

  • 16 years ago

    by Lost and Delirious

    Wow, really touching. u may want to put commas in there so the reader knows where to break.

  • 16 years ago

    by Sydney

    Wow, this is very deep and sad. Again, you write very well. Keep up the great work! 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by CY GINDLE

    You wrote this with such emotion that
    I actually thought you were raped
    excellent write but why don't you put
    this under sad poems <raped> it would get
    more hits

  • 16 years ago

    by Silent Suicide

    I Maybe A Guy But Fer Sum Unknown Reason i Understand This...IDK Its True Some People Dont Beleive Alot OF Stuff Like This....

  • 16 years ago

    by halie

    Wow...
    amazing.. once again lol
    great job,
    i have wrote sum lik this a couple months ago,
    i havent been either,
    but poems lik urs have inspired me to write the ones i have wrote
    5/5
    great write

    -halie

  • Wow. this is a good poem. short, sweet( not like aww) and has a good point on what happens to rape victims. good job.5/5
    **lesthat

  • 16 years ago

    by Lori

    Again, scary! lol but once again, great write girl!

  • 16 years ago

    by ImJustMeAndThatsThat

    Awe this is so cute,
    but really sad.
    Well written!

    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by AyaChan

    :( Good and very real poem.

  • 16 years ago

    by karategirl

    OMG its like my friend..same thing happends
    amazing
    5\5