Nice, you have a way with your writing, thats a good thing too, keep up the good work!

Nice, you have a way with your writing, thats a good thing too, keep up the good work!

Another great write more visualization than the other i read short and to the point yet short enough it leaves you wanting more to read

This is my fav of yours you did a great job!

I msut say i loved this poem becaus ei could relate to it so well, for obvious reasons. it's never easy being caught in a situation such as that, it haunts you forever you could say. but this poem was great example and tribute to those girls who have had this happen to them. very heartfelt of you to write something like this. it was fantastic. job well done. 5/5.

-Ashlei.

Hey my name is amanda. this poem is amazing. i know exactly what you mean because unfortunately i have been through that. but i like this one. keep up the good work! =)

I like your style =]
And sorry, I call everyone bro xD
As I was saying, your style is blunt and straight the the point
I like that

Great topic, nice job!

5/5

This was amazing(:
Nicee work!

5/5

I reallyyy like this one.
One question. . ?
Did he "rape" her or "abuse" her?

Wow...this is deep and really very meaningful. Its sad, and i can understand what youve written here. NIce work though. 5/5 keep it up!

Your poems are beautiful and from the heart..i like them..

This poem honestly brought tears to my eyes. At only 9 years old I was raped by a long time family friend. This really means a lot to me. Wonderful Job. 5/5

Aww this is really sad. rape is a horrible evil thing. you wrote this well.

This is sad..but i liked how you dedicated it at the end..
awesome poem..
keep up the good work. :)

Your poem really touched my heart....i hope your loss was not completely true and is just a work of your imagination,you do made me to shed a tear.....nice work ....keep it up

Wow, this is sad, but you are a very good poet...5/5...yay...

All words are true!
Even though I'm a guy!
I wouldn't understand how a victim would feel
but I know they hurt alot! and it makes me
so Mad cause my aunt was raped countless
of times and my sister was kidnapped and he tried rapping her but she got away and I think god so much! And my twin sister was almost kidnapped! =[
But, People who are raped are barley believed
cause it's someone's Uncle, Cousin, Brother or Friend!
But many people need to realize that rapist come in disguise (dnt know if spelled correct)
And most of the rapist, the victim knows them
and in this powerful poem you sorta said that,
you say the boy took the girls trust!
Great poem and Great Message!
20/5

& srry so long I just had alot to say
on such a short but STRONG poem!