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  • 16 years ago

    by Sourav

    Manish... Hello...
    Just read you poem. Honestly it's very good. Good constructed lines and very meaningful too. But I just want to say one thing more... You should be more careful with punctuations.
    'cant miss a chance to see U' rather write like this you should write it this way... 'can't miss a chance to see you'
    This will make your poem much more significant t the readers. Just a suggestion. I hope you wouldn't mind. Well written poem though.

  • 16 years ago

    by waiting for the unknown

    This is beautiful. the flow is very elegant and graceful. it's intricate but provides enough simplicity to easily guide the readers feelings. great poems :)