by ForeverASickKid Jul 21, 2008
category :
Dark, fantasy /
dark, horror
The night |
by Nawa
A very nice poem, but as mentioned before I think the structure could've been better without the repetition. Still though I really like it and I think you've done a pretty good job. Keep it up. |
by Katie
This is very pretty. Good job, and thanks for the comment. |
by ether
I like this, it's unique and has quite impressive vocabulary. |
Excellently Penned!!! |
This was okay, I didn't really like the repitition of "by".. but it was a pretty good poem. Good write, nonetheless. Keep it up. 5/5. |