Whoa this is another amazing poem it gave me cold chills it leaves thinking the emotions were expressed beautifully its so intense and painful and sad thats why i love it! excellent work xxxxxxxxxxxxxxx 5/5

Hmm there is something about this i really love i think its my fave but ill keep reading the rest of the poems you have :)

I really like this one.
different-but good. its a similar style to mine called "running". i think maybe the first two lines could be put all in one but besides that its great!

It's an okay poem. You have talent, but this poem was very predictable. You put urself in an ironcast and u were stuck with that mold. Poetry is about freedom and the structure of this poem is very restraining. I like what it's about, and you thought outside the box. To me it's a 4/5. I'm not going to rate it because i dont think thats fair. try a more loose structure

The poem is good but I think that the structure would be better if u didn't repeat " By day,By night..."
And about the idea,I think It's interesting and I loved it...
Keep up the good work...

This poem is amazing, i loved it so much. It went straight to my favorites!! Great Job!! 5/5

WOW . omg. i have nothing to say. =D

Nice, keep it up

Omg wow this is so wonderful i love it great job!

I kinda see the world that way awsome poem

It had a good flow up until the last line. 4/5

This one I really liked. It has a good impact and leaves the reader feeling the darkness.

Wow....thats all i can say.....just wow.....

you are really good

I think that was a great poem. keep it up

Well i consider this one a weak subject, frist you need to split it to paragraphs , second you need to work on the rhyming , and third , the subejct, is pointless, you ned to lead the reader from point to point with more accuracy and more feelings, the lines were short and not engough feeling of fear of dark of the nigth ...

i could say this one need much change

Wow, you are so talented in poetry. I loved this poem.

If these are all made up then you have a
talent and you should think about writting
stories. I could write like this all my poems are from my own life. When I was doing drugs I wrote all my horrible tales in a book
and one i found this site put then on here
and everyone like them. so here they are

This is really good, but would be more effective without the capital letters at the end, I think.

I really like this one its my favorite

Great poem....i loved this poem..awesome...=)