U have a beautiful knack of writing

Very beautiful! 5/5

Wow this is one of the most beautiful poems i have ever read on this site you have a way with words.

i loved this so much. 5/5

This is really good.
i love it. kinda sad tho.
:(

Good work... dear fren.. keep it up..

best wishes for ur future writes..

...Karan

If you look for the rhyme with words like melancholy/mystery or heart/want then it's just not there. you have tried to force a rhyme as it seemed to me.
the poem as a whole is good... it goes well as far as the message is concerned. keep writing!

I agree with Aryaan. It seemed kind of forced to me as well. But it is very good as a whole. Great message.

Happy writing!